The writing I liked best was the Greater Good because it is a great reflection of what he has grasped from what his dad is trying to teach him about life. Christian gave examples of what he understands of the lesson on the greater good.
I liked the graphics that you used in your portfolio. I enjoyed reading your writing projects. I would like you to work on the presentation of your portfolio and having you go back and proof read/edit your work.
I think you did really well in your word choice. The words you chose truly helped express your feelings in the Special Place writing piece.
I would like you to continue working on voice.
Julie Bonilla
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